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Joseph L. Wiess's avatar

Rule of thumb: Always try to warn a boy when you are trying to bargain for his life.

Good first chapter.

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John's avatar

As western civilization progresses further into Spenglerian winter, I've been reading the same old science fiction novels on repeat. This is a breath of fresh air. I am very excited about the prospects for this story. Upgraded to paid.

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Sian's avatar

Banger of a first chapter. You have my interest.

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