I must say, the beginning instantly piqued my interest in the world. Can't wait to see more of it. Took me a little bit to get comfortable with the writing, but with each paragraph it got better (or, perhaps, I was pulled into the story and was more invested as it went on) until I was on the edge of my seat. Keep up the work. I am excited to read the chapters ahead. I want to catch up, but, also, I am worried about then having to wait for more.
I must say, the beginning instantly piqued my interest in the world. Can't wait to see more of it. Took me a little bit to get comfortable with the writing, but with each paragraph it got better (or, perhaps, I was pulled into the story and was more invested as it went on) until I was on the edge of my seat. Keep up the work. I am excited to read the chapters ahead. I want to catch up, but, also, I am worried about then having to wait for more.
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