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Longaevi's avatar

Great! This should have been chapter 1.

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Isaac Young's avatar

Thanks! Yeah, I've been told I should rearrange the chapters, and I probably will once I have the whole manuscript together.

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Longaevi's avatar

That's a good idea. Use us as beta readers.

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Alan Van Cullen's avatar

Wow...

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