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Longaevi's avatar

Food for thought: Looking back after the audio I was thinking perhaps more ink needed to be spilt describing the journey to Terminus. In the previous chapter it is described as taking many weeks to reach, but in the story it does not feel like it took that long. You could fix this issue by not going into such detail in the previous chapter about the length of the journey.

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Alan Van Cullen's avatar

This section feels a bit rushed. However, though this section of The Domes of Caltrathia did not stick out to me, the discussion regarding the old dog, Argos, has stuck in my mind. It has stuck in my mind as both a touching moment and as a good picture of virtue.

At some point, I recalled the story to someone, forgetting where I had first learned of it.

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